1. "He uses figurative language to describe a “steeper escalator of daylight". Weakness number 5. -http://contemplationsxjones.blogspot.com/
2. This person does not use any intext citations, and weakness 1. -http://bradey.blogspot.com/2011/10/practice-diction-analysis.html
3. "“They were the free-standing kind: a pair of integral sins swooping upward between the two floors they served without struts or piers to bear any intermediate weight.”" Weakness 2. -http://thelostmessageofwords.blogspot.com/
4. "Baker draws a picture in your mind with his descriptions, "escalator of daylight" and "towering volumes."" Weakness 3. http://almostfacebook.blogspot.com/
The highly descriptive and scholarly diction, the almost philosophical and appreciative tone inserted into Nicholson Baker's connotation, and the harmonious flow ringing throughout the first page of his novel, instill dreamy, practically romantic admiration for the mezzanine Baker speaks of, as this first page is read. Define Mezzanine: [mez-uh-neen, mez-uh-neen] the lowest balcony or forward part of such a balcony in a theater, or in this case, an office building (perhaps, I have not read this book). Baker elaborates on the mezzanine, the centerpiece of his novel, with a subtle passion, as he begins his journey to his office. He observes a "needly area of shine . . . [fall] against their brushed-steel side-panels" and the "long gloss highlights" waver on the black rubber handrails-- and he is amazed. He adores these simple flecks of beauty that he comes across in his office building (?) and he watches them with fanciful amusement, absorbing each simple elegance with the a happy heart.-http://inside-out-lily.blogspot.com/
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